Wednesday, 16 March 2016

the amazing gala day

on Thursday I went to St Mary’s gala with the my family. we went to raise money for the school.

     My mum & my dad & sister  first I touched the cute doggy & then I touched the rabbit after I had to wash my hands  before I ate  candy floss .I got sugar rush  (* - *) a few  minutes later I did the lucky dip I got an egg I pranked lots of people. After that I did a dance it was embarrassing I thought my pants fell down . after I felt a little sick so I ate some fries with sauce  after I went to the big kids playground and so Mr Macmillan taped to a wall it was funny after I had to go

  

3 comments:

  1. Hello Samantha, thank you for sharing your first pice of writing. It is pretty scary getting up on stage. Remember when you are editing that you start each new sentence with a capital letter.

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  2. Hello Samantha, thank you for sharing your first pice of writing. It is pretty scary getting up on stage. Remember when you are editing that you start each new sentence with a capital letter.

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  3. that is cool as samantha by richard

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